Score: 8

"Great !"

submission: cupcake?

date: July 5, 2009

Good concept, it's just a ''random'' short, but it is like a story. I loved it.

It could be analyzed as an artistic piece, showing that was appears to be a dream full of joy might be a creepy nightmare through a science fiction world where everything is a metaphor. It could be a critic about life being an illusion of beauty. It could be a short mute video about how frustrating it is when you chew on a cupcake and realize it was actually a dog... (oh, so annoying when it happens to me !)

Baaahh, probably just a random short !
(What did you use to mess up with the audio?)

Score: 7

"Sweet !"

submission: A duck walks into a bar..

date: July 4, 2009

Haha, nice.

I've heard many versions of this joke, but I think originally, it was a parrot because they can actually ''talk''. Some versions include the [bird] actually getting nailed on the wall / put into the freezer and asking jesus/frozen turkey about how they got there too.

Anyways, good job but make sure you test the volume before putting it on newgrounds next time.

Score: 9

"Very nice job."

submission: Little Wheel

date: June 11, 2009

The game may be somewhat too linear but the animations just flow perfectly. All the details are perfect. There is also some simple mute humor, it was kind of funny. The use of easy and visible markers made the game pretty clear and simple. You did a good job there.

Although, it was not truly a challenging game. Just a movie where the viewer controls elements of the storyline. The simplicity of all the challenges was kind of laughable. The security robot is the best example, just hilarious. Great work. This deserves front page.

(The quantity of fastgames.com ads is very funny too ;) )

Score: 5

"Not so bad"

submission: first flash game

date: June 11, 2009

Yeah, that was alright. No useless waiting time, no racism, no cock jokes. It is a beginner's one-day work, but it's pretty good. No major glitch or failure.

Put three days or even a week in something like this, and you'd get more practice for future projects, a better score and a good achievement for yourself !

(I agree with Magnianimus)

Score: 6

"Yeah, well !"

submission: LolEpic

date: April 19, 2009

Very epic, for the song and the camera moves, but this could be a LOT more epic.

Score: 8

"Good job!"

submission: TOFUZILLA

date: April 10, 2009

I liked the style, and the music was pretty convenient.

Although, I have to say the beginning was kind of confusing, because the action is too fast. Maybe putting an extra 5 seconds of intro would be nice, but that's just my opinion.

Nice drawings in general, the actions are clean and everything is easy to see. You did a great job.

Score: 2

"A...test?"

submission: How to draw a Hippie

date: April 4, 2009

Yeah, okay, you were drawing a hippie.
It was...ok.
No humor, no animation, no voice, hand written 3-words sentences.
Don't expect this to get a good score, and I can't really give constructive comments because... there was nothing like a plot or something. Next time, please do something animated. At least you know how to draw a hippie. :D

Score: 6

"Not bad for a test."

submission: MortalCombatment:BlackRed

date: March 30, 2009

A good test. The animation is pretty fluent, but for it to be a good animation, you need a longer combat or a plot. It was overall good, though, except the characters propotion problems sometimes.

Score: 7

"Good !"

submission: This Game is a Joke 3

date: March 21, 2009

Very nice, i liked the jokes !

And I found the glitch to get the drugs under the ''play again''. :)

Score: 7

"Nice cut !"

submission: The TRUE death of Hinata

date: March 10, 2009

Yeah very good parody of naruto ! It was all very funny, I laughed a lot, but please, PLEASE, don't say ''owned'' if you want to convince people :( .