I liked it very much ! (Yes the scenario is a copy of portal ! But there is a good difference in the gameplay elements)
Some little problems:
-Character is sometimes unable to jump on ascending tiles, probably because the tile catches up to the the character while he's accelerating.
-In the level with the little tile on the bottom and the big tile on the top ''smashing'' each other, they sync out after a while.
-The keys you have assigned are difficult to master as they are not intuitive for the average computer player. Maybe space for jumping?
Although, the game had a very good general feeling and I'm glad I played it. Good work.
Good concept, it's just a ''random'' short, but it is like a story. I loved it.
It could be analyzed as an artistic piece, showing that was appears to be a dream full of joy might be a creepy nightmare through a science fiction world where everything is a metaphor. It could be a critic about life being an illusion of beauty. It could be a short mute video about how frustrating it is when you chew on a cupcake and realize it was actually a dog... (oh, so annoying when it happens to me !)
Baaahh, probably just a random short !
(What did you use to mess up with the audio?)
I've heard many versions of this joke, but I think originally, it was a parrot because they can actually ''talk''. Some versions include the [bird] actually getting nailed on the wall / put into the freezer and asking jesus/frozen turkey about how they got there too.
Anyways, good job but make sure you test the volume before putting it on newgrounds next time.
The game may be somewhat too linear but the animations just flow perfectly. All the details are perfect. There is also some simple mute humor, it was kind of funny. The use of easy and visible markers made the game pretty clear and simple. You did a good job there.
Although, it was not truly a challenging game. Just a movie where the viewer controls elements of the storyline. The simplicity of all the challenges was kind of laughable. The security robot is the best example, just hilarious. Great work. This deserves front page.
(The quantity of fastgames.com ads is very funny too ;) )
Yeah, that was alright. No useless waiting time, no racism, no cock jokes. It is a beginner's one-day work, but it's pretty good. No major glitch or failure.
Put three days or even a week in something like this, and you'd get more practice for future projects, a better score and a good achievement for yourself !
I liked the style, and the music was pretty convenient.
Although, I have to say the beginning was kind of confusing, because the action is too fast. Maybe putting an extra 5 seconds of intro would be nice, but that's just my opinion.
Nice drawings in general, the actions are clean and everything is easy to see. You did a great job.
A good test. The animation is pretty fluent, but for it to be a good animation, you need a longer combat or a plot. It was overall good, though, except the characters propotion problems sometimes.
Yes, the point of it was to learn how to make an animation, so I wasn't going for length or story
I will keep that in mind for when I make more serious movies
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and lol the proportions did get screwed up a lot, I have to watch that
Anael
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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2010
Good !
I liked it very much ! (Yes the scenario is a copy of portal ! But there is a good difference in the gameplay elements)
Some little problems:
-Character is sometimes unable to jump on ascending tiles, probably because the tile catches up to the the character while he's accelerating.
-In the level with the little tile on the bottom and the big tile on the top ''smashing'' each other, they sync out after a while.
-The keys you have assigned are difficult to master as they are not intuitive for the average computer player. Maybe space for jumping?
Although, the game had a very good general feeling and I'm glad I played it. Good work.
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 5, 2009
Great !
Good concept, it's just a ''random'' short, but it is like a story. I loved it.
It could be analyzed as an artistic piece, showing that was appears to be a dream full of joy might be a creepy nightmare through a science fiction world where everything is a metaphor. It could be a critic about life being an illusion of beauty. It could be a short mute video about how frustrating it is when you chew on a cupcake and realize it was actually a dog... (oh, so annoying when it happens to me !)
Baaahh, probably just a random short !
(What did you use to mess up with the audio?)
life is an illusion of beauty, and then you marry one
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 4, 2009
Sweet !
Haha, nice.
I've heard many versions of this joke, but I think originally, it was a parrot because they can actually ''talk''. Some versions include the [bird] actually getting nailed on the wall / put into the freezer and asking jesus/frozen turkey about how they got there too.
Anyways, good job but make sure you test the volume before putting it on newgrounds next time.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 11, 2009
Very nice job.
The game may be somewhat too linear but the animations just flow perfectly. All the details are perfect. There is also some simple mute humor, it was kind of funny. The use of easy and visible markers made the game pretty clear and simple. You did a good job there.
Although, it was not truly a challenging game. Just a movie where the viewer controls elements of the storyline. The simplicity of all the challenges was kind of laughable. The security robot is the best example, just hilarious. Great work. This deserves front page.
(The quantity of fastgames.com ads is very funny too ;) )
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 11, 2009
Not so bad
Yeah, that was alright. No useless waiting time, no racism, no cock jokes. It is a beginner's one-day work, but it's pretty good. No major glitch or failure.
Put three days or even a week in something like this, and you'd get more practice for future projects, a better score and a good achievement for yourself !
(I agree with Magnianimus)
Rated 3 / 5 stars April 19, 2009
Yeah, well !
Very epic, for the song and the camera moves, but this could be a LOT more epic.
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 10, 2009
Good job!
I liked the style, and the music was pretty convenient.
Although, I have to say the beginning was kind of confusing, because the action is too fast. Maybe putting an extra 5 seconds of intro would be nice, but that's just my opinion.
Nice drawings in general, the actions are clean and everything is easy to see. You did a great job.
i edited the music to fit.
Rated 3 / 5 stars March 30, 2009
Not bad for a test.
A good test. The animation is pretty fluent, but for it to be a good animation, you need a longer combat or a plot. It was overall good, though, except the characters propotion problems sometimes.
Yes, the point of it was to learn how to make an animation, so I wasn't going for length or story
I will keep that in mind for when I make more serious movies
,
and lol the proportions did get screwed up a lot, I have to watch that
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 21, 2009
Good !
Very nice, i liked the jokes !
And I found the glitch to get the drugs under the ''play again''. :)
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 10, 2009
Nice cut !
Yeah very good parody of naruto ! It was all very funny, I laughed a lot, but please, PLEASE, don't say ''owned'' if you want to convince people :( .